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There was a girl
who was always alone.
No one knew her name.
No one really cared.
She'd sit in the shadows,
alone,
alone,
and cry.
Cry for herself,
cry, hoping to get pity,
cry, because Mom and Dad were long gone,
cry, because she needed the consolation.
Wherever she went,
her face was shrouded
in darkness.
She couldn't be loved
because she was a loser
to everyone around her.
No one saw the
beauty that was buried
deep in her.
She was once a loser to them
and always would be a loser to them.
She was once their target
and always would be their target.
Things were not easy
for her,
being a loser and all.
She had no allies to
turn to in her
time of need.
So many people know
her pain.
We've all been losers.
It's all true. We hate the underdog and loser just because we have our prejudices and don't think of anyone but ourselves and our standing unless you're a truly good person.
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SoyJacaranda Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
why so serious?
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dramaticdrawer Featured By Owner May 9, 2012
I agree. This poem can really relate to a lot people.
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lunahate Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so true, that it made me cry
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GrowlingLeaf Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Very deep and very true.
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Ainrana Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Excellently stunning. I can tell you firsthand how that feels. It ain't easy being a white Christian in a school of Asians.
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zzzsleepyrockerzzz Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
sorry not suppose to be posted. anyway nice poem and umm ignore first comment. and we all are losers. sad no one can see it.
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zzzsleepyrockerzzz Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2010
I AM A LOSER AND PROUD OF IT!
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zewhomustnotbenamed Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
So true. I think we have all been the ones hating them as well, unfortunatley. Way to make me feel guilty.
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hopelessENDthis Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2009
this rings so close to so many people :no: it was so good of you to capture that and put it into words. VERY nice poem :nod:
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Kawaiiest-Kari Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, I know how this feels like.
So absolutely true.
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emo1982 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2009   Writer
so true i am a loser
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angelboi69 Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2008
this is a good one. I know exactly what that feels like.
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mUsIcFrEaK92 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008   Photographer
Very Very True :(
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mascaraCoverStorie Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Student
Unfortunately, yes. :[
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claresolo Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2008
very true
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Punitha Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2007
So true.
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LadyDancesalot Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2007   Writer
How true...
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Anami-Kumo Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2007
Wow. That's very deep, Cuppy Cake. Very, very deep... And true.
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