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Taste of your mouth on mine. by ~mascaraCoverStorie:iconmascaraCoverStorie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Experimental > Other


The distant sounds in
r e m e m b e r a n c e
of you.  The call.

                                    I remember
                                    YOU
                                    and your out-of-
                                    tune piano and
                                    the five broken
                                    strings that…
(london’s calling.)
                                    that personified
                                    YOU.
                        Tone-deaf and insisting
                        YOU
                        were fucking broken.
                        I love you, little liar.
                        (And I promise you’re
                        as ‘together’ as a
                        shattered porcelain
                        vase.)


                                                                        That night you traced my life line.
                                                                        And my heart line.
                                                                        And my head line.
                                                                        And, my God.
                                                                        I felt beautiful.

You held me in your arms
            on a bed of roses
            bloodied
            red
            where the thorns had
            pierced those deep
            layers of tissue
            that elegantly adorned
            our muscles and bones
            while we were one
and told me
I’m too verbose for words, but sweetheart,
kill me with that Cheshire Cat grin.
with a devilish smirk decorating your lips.

                                    I HATE BEING HUMAN
                                    WITH CARNAL LUST
                                    AND LACK OF SEX APPEAL.


And that was that.
We wiped the slate
            (and our
            mouths)
clean.  I promise
not to think of you
when the air raid
sirens sound, even
if I know it’s you
beneath that gas mask.
©2009 ~mascaraCoverStorie
:iconmascaracoverstorie:

Author's Comments

I love the taste of your mouth on mine.

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=whitenightglasses Feb 28, 2009, 2:08:05 PM
Amazing and beautiful :D

Some of these lines have appeared on your Twitter, I believe? :P

--
:damphyr:
:iconmascaracoverstorie:
~mascaraCoverStorie Feb 28, 2009, 2:10:59 PM
Aww... thanks, sweetie. :blushes:

Yea, I was writing it and laughing about how much I'm ripping myself off. And now, maybe many more of them will show up, slowly.


--
Or do we all
Look. Just. Like:

Adolf fucking Hitler
With this swoopy emo-boy dreamy haircut
Dangling in our faces
Making us all indescribably indistinguishable from each other

Or maybe I'm just another megalomaniac...
:iconwhitenightglasses:
=whitenightglasses Feb 28, 2009, 2:28:33 PM
Anytime :]

Hehe, awesome sauce.

--
:damphyr:
:icontigerxlilly:
~tigerXlilly Feb 28, 2009, 2:39:02 PM
Beautiful, the last three paragraphs are the best.

--
I shall stay the way I am because I do not give a damn! - Dorothy Parker
~
Ich warte auf dich - am Ende der Nacht. - Rammstein
~
Je suis un autre {I am another} - Arthur Rimbaud
:icondark-blood-may:
=dark-blood-may Feb 28, 2009, 10:01:35 PM
I don't know why, but I absolutly love this.
Be proud of yourself, you make Michelle even more confused about her feelings than normal XD

--
>>Michelle<<

I love you, Taylor =]

"You were given the life you live, because someone knew you were strong enough to live it."

:gallery:
[link] <<check it out peas^_^
:iconkrish-x:
~krish-x Mar 15, 2009, 5:43:04 AM
ohgod, you're a talented writer, that was just amazing (:

--
Dreams can come true, but never fantasies, if you nurture a fantasy, it'll most likely get broken.
:iconlovestruck-x:
~lovestruck-x Mar 22, 2009, 11:59:03 AM
wowww. i love this piece.
perfect ending, too. :] <3
:iconlosingmyfaith:
*losingmyfaith Mar 25, 2009, 8:17:39 PM
awesome piece, and i like the format. adds to the originality of the poem. good work!

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" ...he's more myself than I am. Whatever our souls are made of, his and mine are the same, and Linton's is as different as a moonbeam from lightning, or frost from fire."
:iconmascaracoverstorie:
~mascaraCoverStorie Mar 25, 2009, 9:22:58 PM
Thank you. :]


--
Or do we all
Look. Just. Like:

Adolf fucking Hitler
With this swoopy emo-boy dreamy haircut
Dangling in our faces
Making us all indescribably indistinguishable from each other

Or maybe I'm just another megalomaniac...
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